Swallowed by an eternal sleep
I saw a Valkryie at my feet
With blazing eyes and fiery hair
She swept me up into the air
Far beyond the clouds we soared
Past the ancient stars that roared
We came upon the Northern Lights
In all the colours of the night
Throughout heaven she did wield
Flashing light from her golden shield
Emerald streams of orange green
Transformed into a yellow beam
Then under banners proudly arched
Maiden warriors and heroes marched
Across the Rainbow Bridge that lies
Before the gates of paradise
(by Jean-Michel K.)
11 comments:
love your talent,
what a fine tuned piece..
beautiful flow.
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Happy Wednesday!
That's quite a dream - who would want to awaken
Well written piece
thanks for sharing with One Shot
Moon Smiles
A beautiful piece written in classical style. I love the visual imagery - it brought the scene to sparkling life.
very nice...love the norse imagery...the rainbow bridge...give a good word for me when you see the allfather...smiles.
ahhh...what a journey...lovely.. i was dancing lately with my muse towards the northern lights...nice place to go..a dream well dreamt
interesting odyssey
Was her name Freya?
Nice One Shot!
Fun journey here. Nice one shot. Love and Light, Sender
Solid, image-strong work.
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Happy Wednesday!
Blessings!
Welcome link in a poem to our potluck today.
Your talent rocks…
Keep sharing, stay blessed…
xoxox
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